01-01-17

alan42

Jaymie was a beautiful, smart, gifted young girl who excelled in everything she did. She was my great niece who at 15 years of age had something happen in her head and could no longer deal with the pressure of life. Jaymie took an over dose of her fathers medication and left our family heart broken in mid December 2016. I am posting these pictures in her memory. Never forget to tell your children you love them especially during the vulnerable years.

03-13-16

alan42

Well done.

12-12-15

alan42

Lucy was super friendly. I started taking photos of her then walked away. She caught me further up the street shortly after and using the guy I was talking to as a translator she wanted to know how the picture turned out but mostly was I happy with it. She walked away happy that I liked how the picture turned out.

09-18-13

alan42

Color is well chosen. Frame is nicely filled. Great lighting. Focus is sharp. I really like this picture. Motorcycle company would be proud to use this. The negative I see is the head light is positioned to be the main subject but your eye is drawn to the empty light area top left. Maybe it could be darkened slightly.

08-28-13

alan42

Very nice for pre fall colors. But no clear main subject and appears slightly tilted to the left. My critical comments are worth only what you paid for them. Nothing.

04-06-13

alan42

One of my goals is to get pictures on the street where a phone does not appear. Here the young man with the phone is actually looking at the girl so maybe that counts. Never the less you have captured a great picture.

04-06-13

alan42

In this picture you have shown what this camera is capable of doing. Well done.

04-06-13

alan42

This is very scary but well done.

01-07-12

alan42

There is a lot can be done to this picture. Look at the position of her right arm and thumb. Also the flip of her hair over her right shoulder. It just needs to be cropped. Zoom in and apply the rule of thirds. Also do a little work in Photoshop to make the image pop a little. The squint could be just curiosity.