I like you comment Yuris. That is true comment i waiting for to improve my work. Really thank you so much for your great comment.

Which mean i shall go one step behind, so able to capture abit more of her forehead & her half part of her body?

This picture could be great, if you didn't locked her, she almost can't fit the portrait. You should give her "space to breath" .

The comments should not be always saying "great job, nice pic, etc" but also to give some help to improve the photographer to take better and better photos.

Best Regards