I was taught many year ago that the 'Main Subject' should not be in 'The Middle' but here it WORKS !

<3 <3 <3

One of your best.
I never tire of looking at it with emotions taking over.
Bravo!

Dear Friends . . I'm flattered, grateful - and slightly confused, as I generally regard this genre as a field where I don't have much to contribute . . . <3

Good shot ... and wonderful story!
You have captured the feeling of remoteness from any memory and longing that implies. Very well done. Congratulations!!