better, - but. shes got a handk coming out of her head, she has bubble snad a fish sticking out of her back and shoulder. and alswo white bubbles comeing out of her head again. I think those things need to be cloned out - or replaced with something not as ovvious, but- stuff coming out of her head is a big no no - and is very distracting.
also with the 2 3 fingers coming out of her right side (our left side while looking at her).. those need to be removed all togheter.. looks like something is grabbing her from behind........ everything else is okay, althoug her hand placement on the lap seems forced.. She should turn her hand out -and have the fingers pointing UP towards the top of the lam shad... (am i making sense?) LOVE THE BLACK AND WHITE!!!!
also with the 2 3 fingers coming out of her right side (our left side while looking at her).. those need to be removed all togheter.. looks like something is grabbing her from behind........ everything else is okay, althoug her hand placement on the lap seems forced.. She should turn her hand out -and have the fingers pointing UP towards the top of the lam shad... (am i making sense?) LOVE THE BLACK AND WHITE!!!!